I do not need to rethink my audience, purpose, or topic. I just need to delve into it more and provide more examples. I believe that my choices for the audience, purpose, and topic were all good, just under explained.
I do need to revise my thesis, but I do not need to approach the topic differently. I believe I did just fine, and it could benefit from more detail about how irony is the authors rhetorical choice, and how he used it to connect to his audience.
I could improve the organization of my paper by making sure to add details to explain the main purpose I am talking about. For example, if I say that the author uses irony to show how the women’s only club is not fighting for their rights, then I need to back that up with details and show why the author thinks they are not fighting for their rights.
Adding onto the last part, I can then look at my own personal opinion and see if the author is write or wrong, and why. I need to support my answers with details, making the structure for my essay a lot more understandable and professional.
Additional research on the author might help, or on sovereignty itself. However, I do not believe I need to do additional research because aside from explaining my points, I have the information that I need to succeed in writing my essay.
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